rajindersingh 0 Posted September 19, 2008 All comments welcome, i am always learning! Thanks! Link to comment
doug_gentry 0 Posted September 19, 2008 The overall feel and softness of this portrait is wonderful! Excellent work! Regards, Doug. Link to comment
color 3 Posted September 20, 2008 Lovely portrait. Nice colors and lighting. I like the pattern and sharpness of the scarf too. I noticed that the skin tones are somewhat uneven, lighter around the eyes. This might look better if the forehead were lightened a little. Link to comment
rohtas 0 Posted September 20, 2008 Yes you have rightly captioned it as a "Punjabi Girl" your model here has got all the essential requirements of a Punjabi Girl, her skin tone, her clothes and above all her sparkling eyes... Wonderful Portrait, Best Regards, Amer. Link to comment
mike_stemberg 40 Posted September 20, 2008 Absolutely attractive portraiture! The head scarf/shawl serves wonderfully to doubly frame and leads us to focus on the subjects face within the main frame. Rajinder, If I have to 'critique' then I would suggest minimising the slight 'hot-spots on the left side of her face, on the tip of her nose, top of cheek and on her forehead. best wishes ~ mike. Link to comment
hugomonja 0 Posted September 21, 2008 You have gone for an easy solution for background. I would try a different tone, closer to the beige of the veil. I would modify a bit the position of the head, maybe more frontal, and correct the left side of the veil coming out of the frame. Link to comment
lesa jones 0 Posted September 21, 2008 Beautiful portrait....great work....congrats...LJ Link to comment
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