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See also here for a a similar (but more cliche) view of Half Dome.

There is a lot of somewhat boring sky here. Maybe experiment with cropping away most of the sky and trying to get the viewer to focus on Half Dome by sunset.

I checked den Hamer ' and he's right: the other pic is 'cliched' and don't carry the majesty of place as yours. He makes a solid point in terms of the excessive sky and clearly a judicious crop would make it far better.

This is a good landscape. Of course any image of the kind evokes Ansel A. and I wonder if you thought of converting to B&W. You may want to consider - I did it actually, and it looks spectacular.

Cheers.