Untitled

any tips would be wonderful

Nice work, lots of character!!!

Lots of caracter indeed... and a great expression... I bit more of the chin would be even better though, and I like but also feel a bit uncomfortable with the picture quality itself, but well, that's the technique - no choice. Anyway, a powerful image here...:-) Regards.

Very strong picture, I like the grain and the lack of midtones. I think it works fine here. I´d like to see a bit more of her left cheek though, as well as the hand. I don´t like the tip of the knuckles showing.

I really love the B & W images best--wish I had your model! What's with no info on camera, lens, etc???

Nice work. This image has a lot of character. Good cropping, composition, and I like the graininess of the piece.