Casual-Shot 2389

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What a "good abstract" is varies from person to person, so you have taken on a difficult challenge. For me, this looks more like a poorly executed shot. I probably find the soft texture of the wall as a more interesting abstract. The plants at the bottom of the shot are what ruins the effect for me. I don't know if removing them would change your vision of the shot too much, but would it would be a stronger shot for me.

This is a wonderful departure and visually compelling - great crop and color play. I wouldn't change a thing - love the painterly play and photo reference in the window.

 

Congrats,

John

Hi David,,thanks for coming bye,,,if you have read the dogma-rule of Casual-shots,

you will known,,,this is not my shot,,,im just a trustee for the casual ;),,,it is a street shot,,but i think abstract is better,,,an abstract of a house,,,simplified

to a minimum in a short moment,,,,i have no influence,,that s how it was,,,

if i should change anything i would say something of my own idea/view of aesthetics,,

but this is the real thing,,,harsh,,no cream,,,down to earth,,,take or leave it,,,best niels

Hi John nice to hear from you,,,,the exiting of the casual-shot is the "casualty",

i have the same problem in the beginning as David has,,,but now i enjoy it more and more,,,it tells me something new,,,way to look,,,to recognize ,,,light,,once more,,;))