Drops ahead

Critiques please :|

I like your composition; the curve, the snail being on one end, the drops on the other - it's all nicely balanced. What I don't like though is the bokeh - the fact that you can actually see/count the amount of blades of your aperture makes it look very unnatural. More expensive lenses usually have more blades, resulting in nice round circles that do look natural in lighting circumstances like this.