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This must look really great on real paper. I hope you have or get a chance to print it on some Fiber paper. Good cropping and great selection of subject. Nice light. It's also a contrasty scene and that helps since you used 400ISO film. How did you come upon this place? Is it near you? Anyway, great shot. Experiment with where you place the shadowes (moving the fence from say Zone II or III to III 1/2).

Before seeing the title, what I thought of was "breakout". The lighting is not helpful.

Agree with Marc, if you can bring out a little more shadow detail and hold some wall detail top right I think the lighting adds to the composition. Well done.

Lovely, just lovely