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A re-edited version. Opinions?

I really don't see quickly what I would do differently. This is a really good base for a commercial as there is some much area to fill with titles. It has a strong ambiance and the open view angle makes it really 3D. I'd love to see this in A3 size. Maybe the left hand edge would need a bit more light, but I think that is just a finalizing adjustment. Notice that if you'd use this as a full opening commercial the vertical middle is the page fold ... this probably needs to be cropped for mag commercial a little. Anyway, I wish I had shot this. Darn good!