squiver 0 Posted July 19, 2008 I like the mood , but the centered composition is not very exciting. As it is, I'd crop this image to a vertical, eliminating the dark bush on both sides. The dark areas are very distracting imo. With a vertical crop you put more emphasis on the windmill and the water in the foreground. Hope that helps. Link to comment
ekaufman1 0 Posted July 19, 2008 On the whole its a pleasing image - well framed with distracting details well hidden. I might have adjusted the exposure for a bit more highlights - I like the way the light plays on the grass in front of the mill and would like to it emphasized a bit- but thats just personal taste.You also might want to see if you can generate more interest for the eye by placing the subject a bit more off center, still its good image. Link to comment
marcobolding 0 Posted July 19, 2008 Eric, Marsel, thank you for commenting. I chose this composition with the trees as a framing, cause all the other 'rules of a third' composition were a bit boring.I agree on the lighting, perhaps I can re-edit this one for even more highlights in the grass in front of the mill and the mill itself, but believe me when I say that this lighting was already generated and not present and the site due to the bad weather. Link to comment
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