Surreal building, taken in the pool of a fountain.

This was difficult to catch without disrupting the image with the

leaves in the pool, so I ended up sandwiching the building between the

green one on the right and the orange on the left.

Would it work better if I removed some of the empty space on the left?

This looks like Frank Gehry might have designed it. The leaves are a nice touch and really add to the surreal feeling. I think it would have helped to have gotten that red one off of the building and up into the sky. Cropping a bit off the left would really tighten up the composition. You could also add a bit of punch to this by tweaking the colors (it has a bit of a blue cast) and lightening the front of the building while at the same time bumping up the contrast. This also looks good as a BW shot--again with increased contrast.

This is a pretty neat shot, not perfect, but with a bit of tweaking, you can make it lot better.