Molly

I am thinking of entering this in a local photo contest. Can any one

give me any recommendations on how to improve? Thanks in advance, JP

I think it's an excellent shot, the only thing I could say is maybe try to add a little more contrast, or adjust curves, but the exposure, the detail, DOF, everything is great, so maybe enter it and see what happens...I love it though...great model......also it may just be my monitor that makes it seem bright....keep up the great work

Well my friend, here my 2 cents. Her arms pose looks forced, light is quite flat, and framing is too wide for a close up, and too tightened for a full frame body.

On the other hand, I like her eyes expression and hair texture, an interesting dof as well.