Twig Oaklyn Flewinia Thistlebottom

I am leaning to take portraits this summer. Any comments help...

Thanks for looking!

Nicely seen. Too bad about the remnants of real people in the top corners.

i really like this one and agree about the feet of the other people i have had the same problem i tried to clone them out just to see here is my try hope you dont mind

 

Amber

I agree with the previous opinions. Try also a lower angle of shooting. I like the expression.

Twig Oaklyn Flewinia Thistlebottom (or "Twig" for short) is a curious, lively woodland sprite who embodies childlike innocence and wonder. Her bashful mannerisms and graceful flitting movement create a whimsical space that she warmly invites every one to share. Playing a double piped aulos (flute), Twig mesmerizes passers-by with playful lilting jigs and slow, haunting airs. To children, she always bestows a token of friendship; a magic stone glittering with faerie dust. Young and old are left wide eyed in wonderment. Drawn to the festival by her curiosity, Twig delights in exploring her astonishing surroundings. Each day she gleefully makes enchanting discoveries as she tries to understand the perplexing and foreign customs and habits of mortals. Twig