I scream for Ice Cream

A classic British seaside moment.

 

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It's a striking image, highly original. I think a little sharpening of the lower 3rd? A river of ice cream, who would have thought - makes a nice textural contrast against the sand. You did well to beat the ants to it. Regards.

Just a little brighter, whiten the icecraam and lighten the sand, neat idea, nice compositon.

very good composition. the stream of ice cream leads the eye down the picture, and the colors contrast nicely