First Bowl

Does the angle work here? How about the color and slight vignetting?

Any and ALL comments/critiques would be most appreciated.

I like everything, in fact, except the angle. I think it's because bowling alleys naturally have such striking lines that you don't need to impose an off-kilter horizon to liven things up. I'd also probably try cropping some of the ceiling out, just that first section (keep the layers of lighting as much as possible), as I don't know that it adds anything to the composition. The lines in the floor are great, so I wouldn't crop there.

I like the striking (no pun intended!) green against all the beige of the alley, and the bowler's reflection in the floor. I also do like the vignetting, and the motion in the bowler and the ball. Nice job!