Pool walkway, trying to get low perspective.

Good perspective, carefully arranged. I just don´t like the lack of sharpness in the bottom area of the picture. What about cutting off the bottom of the picture and keep the rest behind the shadow? But nevertheless: Well done!

Glen, not a bad effort mate. I know coming from the north side myself we've seen this shot a few times but I must say I never get tired of it. The only thing I would suggest is printing on a much higher grade. The image is lacking in contrast in a big way. If you look at the whites on the post they are grey, so it needs at least 1.5 or 2 grades I'd suggest. Also I think it would look a little better in terms of composition if you cropped the a little tighter on the left. Apart from that the DOF etc is good.

Thanks Simon. This was my first roll of B+W film, and it was VERY clumsy. I had it developed at the Mall, and was a little naieve about the composition.

Good picture. Maybe the sky needs a little more. Have you thought about using a filter?