je.barreto1 0 Posted May 20, 2008 First: welcome! Now the picture; very interesting, and intriguing, mood... Tonalities are very pleasant and I must say also that I like the composition... But I do not understand what the man is doing and I'm not very happy with that. Forgive me! Overall a very captivating image. Best regards. Link to comment
aplumpton 16 Posted November 4, 2008 Shows good originality of vision, but if I were you, I would return to the Castle and try several similar and different compositions, especially to explore further your good idea and to avoid the bell ringer's hands being mixed up with the ladder, and perhaps to alter the position of the disk shaped object to the left. The disk adds strength and mystery to the image, but you should try other compositions. Lots of great potential as an image (with interesting mechanical forms in the background as well). Nice perception of the force required by the ringer, by the positin of his body. I would also try black and white. Have fun (let us see any alternative images you might try) and thanks for your vision. Link to comment
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