Don't let me die guys...

Thanks for critiquie......

The most obvious improvement I can see is to crop the left side and get rid of those squares and candles with them. They don't look to belong to the grouping and break the composition.

What is your idea? Light, contrast, shapes...There is not much that we can do without these indications. Cheers. Yves P.

Those squares symbolize the outside world, a world in which everyone wants to stay as long as posible... Probably they "break" the picture, but .....