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The light on the apple is a bit much. Perhaps use a gobo to settle the light down there so that you can get a little more onto your model's face. A touch more light to liven her eyes would definitely help.

Perhaps the amount of light on the forbidden fruit is just right; it is highlighted as the cause of human-kinds curse. Look at the expression on Eve's face. With one bite of the fruit that gives knowledge and understanding of good and evil she realizes what she has done! But then maybe Eve picked a mango and this is an apple, so this is just a picture of a model with a slightly too-bright-to-show texture apple flesh. The meaning is in the eye of the beholder.