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Beautifull model, does not seem ready when picture taken.

Sorry, but I just don't see at all your usual standard of work here... I find this very common, with nothing special anywhere in the frame. Decently composed, ye, but exposed a bit on the bright side, whereas the light on the rock seems to indicate a sunset and the need for a little under-exposure... Colors also nothing special, and therefore it would be better in Black & white in my opinion... Regards.

I must say that every time I see a nude-in-the-environment image like this, I think about what it must have been like to sit bare-arsed on that rock. I know what she's thinking -- how much dirt will I have clinging to my bottom when this guy lets me move. And, how much am I getting paid in modeling fees and is it worth it?

 

In other words, thoughts evoked by imagining what it must have been like to be in this photo get in the way of any aesthetic or other consideration.

I agree John, (laughing as I type this) I wonder what would I accept to pose like this. Money or Beer. Definitely a beer shot.

 

The photo itself I think could have been cropped a little tighter or if not, desaturated (converted to black and white), then sepia-toned with a punch in contrast.