self portraits Watching over us.

I like the idea of photographing people's reflections as they walk by this memorial, but I don't really like the self-portrait aspect of it. I think if you caught a scene of maybe an old man walking with his grandson, and you got the reflection of them, then that would be great, because it would have emotion and a story.

I'm not saying that that's the only reflection that would work, but that I think something like that would work better than what you have here.