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An Old Woman & An Old Pick-Up Truck


mozy

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The green isn't flattering, especially as the womans skin tone. Try more of a sepia, with a defined black space using the dropper in the curves tool in PS. I am asking everyone today to please get into the critique forum to judge and rate the pot. We can't keep submitting our work and having it judged, if noone is willing to do the judging and the critiquing. Believe it or not it draws people to your gallery, you get to meet some great artists, and your work is critiqued and commented on more often. Some of you may feel like you aren't good enough to critique others work, but this is a forum to see what the general public and artists think of our work. It's a place that helps us learn to be better, and everyone's opinion counts. Please make this place what it used to be, by taking on the honor code, if you submit work to be critiqued, then give pn thirty minutes to rate other's work, it gives you ideas, it helps you identify what you like and don't like in a picture, and it will help you develop into the greatest artist you can be.
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To me it kind of looks like the lady just got hit by the truck. If that's what you were going for, then you pulled it off perfect. If not, I'm not sure what to tell you. I really don't like the oddly altered colors, they just seem to degrade the image quality.
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Jennifer, Tom, thank you very much for your comments. The photos was originally in Black and White, i was using an ISO 400 black and white film. I cropped the photo to the square format and played with the colors on PS. I'll post the orignal one and i hope i'll also get some feedback. The weird thing with this photo, with its 'odd' colors, is that some people just loved it, while others really hated it. But as long as it got both view points i'm happy.

Tom, i wasn't aimign to get the effect of the woman hit by a truck, i simply wanted to show old with old. Maybe Sepia would be better as Jennifer suggested.

Anyways, thannks you guys very much for your critiques, it was really useful.

Peace,

Moe.

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