Shinri

Just looking for some feedback on this - I like it for the gemoetry

but want to see what other people think

 

Laurie

I like the use of triangles in the composition. The softbox is so bright my eye was drawn there. I have two small things that would have helped. His left arm being cut off is a bit distracting and the item on the floor to his right also attracted my attention. As a "grab" shot during a session it is very interesting.

It's interesting how much the shadow he stands into contrasts with the bright softbox, but I think it might be reducing him too much to a second plane. Still, I like how the bright triangle on the right and the light from the left almost touch at the top.

Interesting and mysterious. The kind of shot that makes one wonder about the subject and the moment.

i also find the softbox a bit distracting, but that could be corrected with some burning in in the darkroom.

His expression, the lighting and shadow on his face are wonderful, i`m rating this 9/9.

 

Oh btw - perfection is boring, so don`t take too seriously the softbox problem.

I wish the model stood out from the background a bit more.

I to would like to se a little more separation of the model from the background and for a little less shadow on his face. I am still pondering the whole composition of triangles, I will post again when I have had time to really study this.