I am trying to capture a certain look and Im not sure about this.. Could you help me with an honest critique? Thank you so much.

Im looking for an honest Critique !!

 

Thank you so much ahead of time !

Im looking for a certain "look"

 

and Id love an honest critique

Thank you so much

Seeing the photo for a second..: something with her mouth.. After LARGER : closed is better. Beye..! Back to Europe.. :) (also hmmm.. about the reflection)

Hi Glenna, I think the highlights are way overexposed, they seem to be completly blown-out. Also the reflection is cut off at an awkward height, very distracting. I don`t think this is what you`re looking for. Best regards, Jim.

Jim and Olaf Thank you so much for your critiques..

I didn't notice her mouth until you said it !!!

As far as the "hot spots" Thank you much I will work on it

 

Glenna