Critical Mass

Interesting idea, but technically it doesnt look so hot on my monitor.

(OLD COMMENT) i have been sucking up a bunch of different pix into photonet to be able to learn about the process and see the images on different monitors. i am new to the internet and only recently bought a scanner. so i really appreciate feedback. especially negative comments on technical matters. seriously! my first lesson was that my monitor wasn't callibrated. so lay it on: could you be more specific on why the photo doesn't look good to you. lay it on!

I like B&W a low...I think there are a couple of things that may help out this pic...First, try to be careful about image alignment in the darkroom. If you want to have a black border, be careful with its width all around. Second, this pic might be able to use a little more contrast. You may try printing it with one of the more pink-colored Kodak darkroom filters. Or you may want to experiment with burning in different areas -- it just looks a little washed out. Also, it doesn't look very sharp, but that just may have been an artifact of scanning in the pic...you'd have to check the negative with a good loupe to know for sure. Good luck!

T. Bloxom

One of my favorite pics...