Peek-a-boo

My opinion only. You should raise the contrast. I attach one I quickly modified. You should have shot her in such a way that the bottom of her skirt was almost at the bottom of the photo. That gives the photo a cutoff point. the face is the focal point so it should be about 1/3 from the top. There is a lot of wasted useless space about the head. Since you did not shoot with head higher and the bottom of the skirt as a frame than you are left with the option of croping after the fact. I attach the photo I think you might have tried.