Marine

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Nicely done. I like the organization of the scene. I can't quite make out what those items are in the bottom left corner. The crack arcing up and to the right almost makes her look tethered to the scene. It gives a bit of tension that disturbs and intrigues.

Her pose and expression work well. To me, she looks up to something. Like she has a lot to do with those metal pieces causing the cracks up the wall.

 

~Anthony

I had the same reaction as Jeff, it looks like she's tethered. Her expression is also almost impish... like as Anthony says, she's up to something. Very well done.

great work Ger super portrait and great background the 2 objects in the bottom left distract alittle from this.

 

Rich.

Excellent composition and tones. Fine portrait. Regards...