hayward 0 Posted August 7, 2002 Terrific framing and composition. I wish her face was sharper, but maybe that's the way you wanted it. If you found my comments useful, please rate and/or comment on my portfolio. Link to comment
gianpaolodettoma 0 Posted August 7, 2002 Nice composition. The face is maybe too lit. Link to comment
mg 0 Posted August 7, 2002 The highlights are too extreme imo. Otherwise ok. Crop off the little border of wall on the right as well. Regards. Link to comment
35mmbluz 0 Posted August 14, 2002 I particularly like the washed out skin tones and slight overexposure of the face. The higher contrast on the clothing with the green window frames makes for a unique feel to this photo. I like the flatter colors as well. I do agree with the cropping issue-a slight bit off the right may be worth a shot. A wonderful portrait! Link to comment
jed goode 0 Posted August 14, 2002 Lovely shot. I really like the framing, pose, colours, setting. The only downside for me is the presence of the washed-out areas on your model's face and particularly her hands. A touch less contrast might improve this. In the same way it would have been nice to be able to clearly see all the graffiti on the window. Overall though this is a very attractive image. Link to comment
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