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In my opinion there a too large area in the centre of the picture which is out of focus and the two in-focus persons do not manage to give the picture enough details to tell a story. The relationship between the two passer-bys is not clear, the one under the umbrella is a bit too dark to be seen.

Saluti,

Luca

a mio avviso c'e' una area troppo ampia fuori fuoco e le due figure a fuoco non riescono a raccontare la storia. La relazione tra i due non e' chiara e la figura sotto l'ombrello 蠴roppo scura e quindi con pochi dettagli.

saluti, Luca