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Dear Grant, it's a nice subject. However, you should be more careful when you prepare shots like this. The lighting is off, sharpness is off and most importantly it's not very flattering on her. When women take the trouble to pose for you like this the least you could do is photograph them as perfect as possible (i.e without any imperfections). I'm sorry but you didn't succeed in that.

With a model like this you could do better, a whole lot better.