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One piece of advice, when shooting pictures of people like this, don't put their head in the middle of the frame, it leaves the entire top of the picture with nothing of interest. Move closer, fill the frame with the subject, pay attention to the background.

Dear Charles,

Thank you for the criticism. Even more so that

you promised one piece of advice, and ended up

generously offering four!

Unfortunately, I have no means to crop the photos,

all of my shots are exactly what came out of a scanner.

If I could, I may have cropped this one a little,

but not much: to my taste, this model needs space

around her.

Regardless of anything, your criticism is

well taken. Thank you, and best regards.

R.