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Comments are welcome ... thank you.

Michael, I love this photo..with the exception of the porton of the wall that looks damaged... (top right). just a suggestion, but cloning it out might be a thought. just guessing, but perhaps you left it to give balance to the rectangular object diagonal to it?

Michael... I think you have a fine idea here but I would like to submit a suggestion or two... Part of the apeal of your image here is the precision of the squared and repeated doorways. In my opinion if you were to correct the barrel distortion (curved lines) of the foreground doorway, you would have a more appealing image. Also, I agree with Mr Galyon regarding the small detail in upper right. As a final thought, perhaps intensify the values slightly for a little more "drama", but this is purely a matter of taste...

Fine Image...

Bill G

John, Bill -

 

Thank you for your very good suggestions, I have applied them to the image, they made a big difference.

 

Best regards,

 

Michael

Good work... I have upgraded my rating to 6/6..

Bill G

came back to rate..6/6 as well.

WOW ! very nice shoot !

Beautiful, subdued light, nice geometry... Just like a stage:The show is about to begin, something is bound to happen!