yves_p 0 Posted February 10, 2008 Good composition and nice skin tone. I like her shyness. Congratulations. Link to comment
ray_rosher 0 Posted August 2, 2009 Hi Jan Doef Well I have to admit that over the past couple of years Iv'e been dithering over what part of the photography world i wanted to focus on (Excuse the pun) After looking at your portrait and nudes you have made my mind up for me! I love the lighting and the dark blue background of this picture, I think that this background lends itself perfectly to the model What impress's me is although their is a gaping space on the left the models eye's are the first thing that you focus on, what I like the most about this picture is tha way the lighting and shadows around the eyes give the model a mistique, This picture I think lends itself very well to the inner pages of a magazine the left side leaves room for a caption or product placment What i may have done for a more intomit photo is to crop the picture, so that only her head neck and and shoulder where visible, close the picture up and lose some of the blue background What I get on her shoulder is a subtle hint of a bra strap mark going down towards her right breast, although this is being super critical on my part, which could be unfare as hiring a model for a photo shot dosne't come cheap So i can understand time constraints Still I really Really like this picture, Tell me Jan! are you on face book. Link to comment
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