Triptych

Jardin du Luxembourg, Paris... kid spoilt my shot? View Large. Thanks

for looking.

the kid *makes* the triptych, nice work!

agreed - the kid is the story. it almost begs for a fourth. does he drop the coat in the trash? Leave a shoe as he runs off? or just moves on and leaves it as he found it.

I find it original and well composed, I like it very much! Anyway I would prefer a different sequence: closing the triptych with the child standing leaves it somehow unfinished, while I think that the empty space is stronger as a closure for the sequence: moreover, as it follows directly the second one without a frame showing the child walking off the balance, it adds some surreal meaning... was it a time machine or a space-teletrasport gate? he just inserted a coin and disappeared!

 

Regards,

Marco