Camella

Wanted to do a waitress pin up type shot. C&C appreciated.

I like the retro 50's waitress style of this shot. The color and lighting are nice but the one thing that I noticed immediately is the framing....clipped at the left while plenty of space on the right. That is probably the biggest flaw in my opinion. The focus is also a bit soft, you can see it in her face especially but that is not necessarily a bad thing as it gives the photo a softness; however, I personally would think it to be better a bit sharper. Btw, tell the model she is a doll.

Thanks so much for the comments. I'll watch out for those things in the future.