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anything you could say to help me out would be great if y0u could

check out my other self port's) and tell me what i need to be doing

that im not

Tabitha, one of the consistent elements in your work is the lighting so I'm not certain how you would go more natural. You seem to have a sense for how to position yourself with respect to the light in order to produce effective images.

some of the images you posted are bizaar of nature and I am sure meant that way ( lighting, colour and perspective) and don`t get me wrong...bizaar is often more interesting than the obvious we all have come to know...this image has more common elements of a portrait...your lighting is good..your pose is sexy and provocative....but you need to watch for distracting background and foreground........detlef