becki.pino 0 Posted November 28, 2007 My turn to be IN a shoot! Ha! Thanks for looking! Comments are appreciated!! Hugs, Becki~ Link to comment
themusikman 0 Posted November 28, 2007 kudos on the portfolio.this shot, while nice in its way, actually kind of weirds me out. i think the part that gets to me is the inner bevel. IMHO, i would either ditch it, or even better, make it black enough to block the rest of the shot. If dropping the rest of the shot, I would crop a little higher on your head to balance the full hair on the left, while still keeping the sleeving to hold that side of the shot. (on further reflection, i would simply widen the crop to include a little more top hair and a little more bear. still, lovely work.DTKbtw, lovely models. Link to comment
becki.pino 0 Posted November 28, 2007 So I re-edited it and am going to attempt to put it here so you can view it! I didn't widen the crop but I did take out the framing. Tell me what ya think!! Hugs, Becki~ http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff233/lilrebenec/becki.jpg Link to comment
themusikman 0 Posted November 29, 2007 I think that what you have done is a definite improvement. I have a slightly different cropping available, but my preferred crop for this shot wound up a 5x7. However, I have included a cropping keeping with your 8x10 (unfortunately above this instead of below). If you would like the 5x7 cropping as well, just contact me through themusikman@photo.net Link to comment
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