Bride 3(Change image **headroom**)

Comments and ratings are welcome.

..with not much effort -- you've got really nice colors to work with, and an attractive model -- get rid of the car, the fabric she's got under her arm, and all that wasted space above her head. If you're going to do one of her looking over her shoulder, have her take off that necklace, it's distracting in the back (as her shoulder/neckline becomes a central feature of that kind of portrait). Make better use of the stone -- it's a nice texture to have in the picture, particularly given the green background and the contrast with her dress and skin tones. The ingredients are there for a much, much better picture.

Too much headroom

I agree with the above comments. Attention to detail is so important in portraits like this...that car in the background and the awkward way she's holding the black wrap are BIG details.