Jordan.

This was shot from the hip. Due to the fact that the person in the

portait hates cameras...But I really liked the way it came out. what

do you think? if you don't like it, comments are the best way to help

me improve...thanks.

DO NOT even touch that photo! It is wonderful.

i think its beautiful.

I love it.

It's interesting and I like it. But I think that her arm at the bottom and hand on the right side of the photo are too bright and it definitely drew my attention away from her face. I think cropping out the overexposed parts would greatly improve this picture which has a very definite emotion conveyed, which I think deserves to be displayed more effectively.

keith

thanks for the great comments! I Think you may be right about the hand keith, didn't notice that till now. Although I think a little burning in may do the job. Thanks agian!

i think the hands add a touch of personality to the girl. i would argue against cropping them.