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This is a shot from a patrol in Al Fallujah, Iraq while I was with

4th Platoon, K Company, 3rd Battalion, 5th Marines. Any input or

comments are greatly appreciated!

Hard to comment based on not knowing what you are trying to show.

If this photo journalism let me suggest that it might be improved by the soldiers looking into the frame and not out of the frame.

You have shown action but the man on the left is too blurred and too close to the camera with all the added blurring behind him.

Don't know what the car adds to the image, maybe that this is a checkpoint.

Once again I'm not a PJ but this is what I see.

Ask yourself, what message am I attempting to get across.

cheers,

and thanks for your service