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For a school-type portrait it's very well done. I would edit out the piece of hair over her eye and the bright piece on the right of her face. I would leave it like that if you are going for a standard, JC Penny-type portrait - she's gorgeous and the puppy is cute! To bring it more to the artsy/unique side I would play around with B&W conversions, or leave it in color and boost the saturation and contrast a bit.