Thirst

I'm thinking there is a bit too much space at the top, not sure. I am

interested in opinions, comments, suggestions, whatever you all can

offer. Thanks!

i don't think you have too much space on top. in fact, i think you could use a little more, simply because the flow of the water finishes the picture. You might want a little more space to the left, thinking of the rule of thirds, but that's just my humble opinion. It's your work and I think it's great. It captures her playful innocence. Nicely done, Mitch.