maddox 0 Posted November 5, 2007 Very nice composition and colors. However, there appears to be just too much noise in the sky. Also the clouds look flat. You might try using Noise Ninja to reduce the noise, and perhaps some basic dodging & burning on the clouds to give them a little more texture and depth. Also, the dark spot (a bird?) to the left of the statue is very distracting. Overall, this is a very pleasing image. I don't think it would take a lot of work to improve it dramatically. -Michael Link to comment
lenina 0 Posted November 5, 2007 Finally a well done CRITIQUE!!! I am very happy to receive it, Michael... it is the kind of comment that I hoped to read when I enter on PN. Sorry for my low english, however I hope you have understood that I am thanking you for your critique, and I am going to make the adjustments that you suggested. Thank you again! Link to comment
maddox 0 Posted November 6, 2007 Prego! Parla inglese più meglio che parlo italiano. Ma mi sento felice per avere l'occasione practicare ne scrivere. Spero che anche lei mi dà un critique. -Michael Link to comment
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