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Please tell me what you think.

I know you are trying to be "artsy" with your effort, but it falls short of anything artful. I recognize this is a harsh statement, but with a submission like this in an open forum, you open yourself and your credentials to such criticism. I know you have better work than this.

Interestingly enough, this photo was chosen to be in a gallery in downtown New York with other high school photographers. I guess everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but it seems at least somebody liked the shot.