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hello George,

First and foremost your photo is really attractive.It grabs attention.

One can build a quick story by joigning together what's for me is really two different photos.A Dyptich for the price of one. Your photo is rich in that it can tell a story.

But it's too rich at the same time in terms of visual information which prevents my eyes from embracing your photo as a whole.

The most distracting(cause it distracts the eye from the couple or/and the screaming face caged in the ad) are the geometric lines on the ground you caught in your composition.They take the eyes away from the characters to have them converged at the foot of the tree cornering the street.Hence delaying the reading of your photograph which has a palpable content.Rich I said before.

Maybe a better standing point would have been in front of the tree in the foreground to bring a balance in your photo and direct the viewer's eyes to the 2 scenes in one photo-story you still brilliantly caught.

That's all Folks.Hope it helps.

Good Eye/Catch in the end.

Cheers.

Dear Stephane,

I really thank you for these words!I'm thinking already to go back.I sometimes

go back in places that i've already photographed just to see how the passing time altered these.

George