Twisted

Comments welcome.

Very interesting. I think I would like it better if the background wasn't there, but you've got excellent composition and a great eye for the subject.

It looks nice for the most part. There seems to be some vignetting or some slightly harsh lighting that dampens the artistic effect.

 

 

Jason - Thanks for your comments. I think you're right about the background, this was a quick process and post. I think I will revisit this shot again and make some improvements. Thanks for taking the time to comment.

 

Brian - You're right about the lighting too. That's easily fixed.. I'll work on it. Thanks for your input, I really appreciate the honesty. :)

 

Karen

The name is half the picture. It is well down and I love the way it is in the middle of the picture twisted.

 

Have you tried it in B&W. I know I always ask this. But it looks like it would look cool in B&W. :)

I'm not sure which I prefer.

 

B&W version:

Redid it again and decided it stands on it's own in black and white.. uploaded here.

 

Still not sure which I like better.

 

Karen