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any comments?

Sigh! A pretty girl, close up, with a flirty look in her eye! Could anything be more lovely? A very satisfying look. Is it perfect ? No, it could be improved, especially for the glamorous look it has.

1. Both eyes need highlights.

2. Bulges under eyes need reduction

3. Lips need glossy coat so as not to look chapped.

4. Black border detracts - see art books on subject of simultaneous contrast.

 

Re-photograph or retouch?

That's what i needed most - a good critique... thanks for the advises, I will try to retouch it.. this i s a model, and I won't be able to reshoot the photo again