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I took this shot in my living room, with my freind modelling for me.

It was taken for a "line assignment for school...this is one of my

shots. Please let me know what you think.

Thank you

An original composition for an often-shot assignment.

 

You and your friend did a nice job with this image.

 

Cheers.

Amanda, Nice work! Composition is very stong! Your point of view is wonderful! IMHO, I would have taken this image nude. Other than that. It's very striking! Thank you for sharing. DG

I usually have trouble commenting on photographs of photographers who don't often comment on the work of others. After all, this is what this site is about. However, this is such a striking shot that I do feel compelled to write something. Quite excellent! It should do you well! I agree that the image would be stronger as a nude. It would give the feeling of total comfort and yet still leave the model with her annonmity.

hi

nice , nice capture, great composition, congratulations

good luck

Thank you everyone for all the constructive critisism....It is really helpfull to have opinions from other photographers.

Love the photo...would look great black and white too, in my opinion.

It's really a good work. Shadow's stripes make this nude study very interesting. The only thing that doesn't work very fine is her right foot that is too much in light. Congrats.

 

Alessandro

Awesome shot! I was looking for an example trying to show a friend how you can use shadows in a picture, and ran across this. OMG just awesome :)

excellent secrecy and revail thank u loads 4 ur comment