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hi

im nima a new photographer in photo.net

i request anyone who see this photo to critique

this portrait is unfortunatelly overexposed (too much light on the face . Also the work with DOF could be better. cheers Jana

I agree with Jana

I know that, but I didn't have any time to even think, My grandmom, suddenly started to cry and I just wanted to fix that, thank you by the way. Nima