Wedding walk

I would like you to please critique honestly and respectfully.I am a

beginner.

It's not bad. Personally I like lots of contrast, so I would compress the levels further. Also something could be done with the sky or grass. If you shot this raw, how does the sky look like under the red channel? How does the grass look under the green channel? I say raw because you will get less banding per channel that way. These suggestions probably won't please your clients too much, but would make this picture more interesting for my taste at least.