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Your bold (or trendy) framing looks really good, and upper viewpoint is near perfect for me. Eye contact is fine and catchlights also. Her look is interesting too. Tonality looks great.

Something different? I am not sure, but there is possibility, that in high key portrait like this, her vest could be lighter; somewhat large dark area on chest may draw attention away from her faces.

Whatever, very good portrait. One to be proud of. No ratings, as I do not them anymore. a s l a