Forget dinner honey

I'm just starting out. Any constructive criticism is most welcome

I like the concept (and the title!). Photo would look great in black and white. Maybe try the shot again with a more simple bed dressing (comforter/pillow shams). Keep it up though! It's a great start!

Thanks Christin, your input is much appreciated. I do actually have a B&W version and may post it when I get more webspace on this site. I will keep posting though.

I agree the bed cover detracts. Try to lighten her eyes to pull the viewer into the image